April 6: Rehearsal (Photo credit: sarahbest)
his ink brush
patterns into night–
Northern moon
In response to a masterful image found here:
A 19 PLANETS ART BLOG 2010/2013
Usagi
The Poetic Rabbit
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Shiteki Na Usagi 
the night is when i find myself most creative as well…nice turn in that last line…
brian,
I’m growing curious. Several people have mentioned the last line. I’m wondering what they see in it. Care to share?
always always a joy reading your blog! Sincerely Debbie
Deborah,
Very happy to have you here. If you have your own blog, please do leave a link so I may visit. I look forward to your next visit.
aloha Yousei Hime – way fun. bwahahahaha – i have to laugh because i too work way into the night. and often accompany the moon. thank you for playing Poetic Rabbit, play any time. aloha.
Then perhaps this ku is for you, sensei. 😉 Happy to play. I’m trying to hop around more often (such a lazy bunny).
Boy you really kicked me in the guts with your third line. Perfect. Second line is lovely but your cut is so well-judged. It’s nice to read a real haiku : )
Luke,
Not sure how cold fronts are referenced in your “neck of the woods” but in south Texas they are often referred to as “Northerns.” Really cold ones are titled “Blue Northerns.” We haven’t had one yet this winter, but I was in the mood for one (thus the poem). Thank you for the comment (always appreciate your observations). Keep up the posting.
AWWWWWWWWWWW!
Simply “wonderful”.
I can see painting brush in action
and
the painting
and
your words.
Love this, Poetic Rabbit. Truly do.
47whitebuffalo,
😀 Your enthusiasm is a perfect reward. Thank you for stopping to read and share.
nice!
Angie,
Thank you. Hadn’t written any in some time. Feels good. 🙂