NaHaiWriMo Day 24

bubbled waves launch corsair’s xebec — bathtime Sparrow

)”]Sailing Boat

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bookshelves haiku packed — Japanese xenophile Japanophile v.3

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with fingers entwined

honeysuckle — when you please me goosebumps on my breasts

About Yousei Hime

This is the journal of a poetic rabbit. Within the warren you'll find poetry, short stories, essays, art, book and movie reviews, and other odds and ends. If you happen to meet the fey princess, be courteous. This rabbit did and was forever changed.
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13 Responses to NaHaiWriMo Day 24

  1. Raven says:

    These two Haiku bring a smile to my face.

  2. Raven says:

    Yousie, I love your new bunnies! I also like the senses that your Haiku invoke.

  3. David King says:

    Three absolute delights. These are haiku as they should be – in my humble opinion!

  4. slpmartin says:

    Like this array of verses.

  5. A wonderful collection of haiku.

  6. margo roby says:

    ‘ku’ — we can refer to them as ku? I love it. And I like your comment to me that these stand as single flowers and you name the flowers, tulip, daffodil, and crocus. In itself the comment becomes poem.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      margo,
      I’m not sure. I’ve seen it a lot, but haven’t looked for it’s origin and authenticity. I’m more a go with the flow on that kind of thing, unless of course it meant something horrible in Japanese. Surely someone would have caught that by now. I’m eager for spring, thus the specific flower references. My daffodils are already shooting up, now with a blanket of snow. Each poem has a different feel, right? I’m not sure they were well matched to their respective flowers, since I was think of spring early bloomers. Maybe hyacinth should have been one. ;) Thanks for dropping in and sparking more thought.

  7. sanjuktaa says:

    Like the ku…like the images too!

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