NaHaiWriMo Day 25

egg hunt
every child’s nose lily dustedSmelling the Flowers


proof this house is full of men–stained toilet seat


red rocks sage winter sky more than a sunset


About T A Smith

Just one of the literacy scholars on this site who wants to explore writing in all its complexities.
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14 Responses to NaHaiWriMo Day 25

  1. Fergiemoto says:

    …”lily dusted”…so cute!

  2. David King says:

    All good, but the first one bowled me over. Quite exceptional, I thought.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      David King,
      I like the first one best two. I also like exploring other uses of the prompt word, thus the birth of the other two. Thank you for letting me share them with you.

  3. this is so sweet..I love it

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Susie Clevenger,
      😀 So glad you liked it. It’s one of those irresistible moments for me, children in their Easter finery searching for eggs. Thank you for letting me share these with you.

  4. slpmartin says:

    Oh what a darling scene you create with the poem…loved it.

  5. Maria Tatham says:

    The first is such a wonderful image in words (then the picture).
    The second is observation of the facts! :0)

  6. Raven says:

    A case of sweetness … and truth. 😉

  7. brian miller says:

    smiles…those are def fun times…like the lily dust…goes well with easter thoughts…

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Yes. That time is right around the corner or seems like it. My grandparents always had an array of lilies about their place. I remember purposefully pollinating my nose. Glad to share these with you.

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