For Tuesday Tryouts – Let’s Fly

Decree

I know the earth.
You know this.  You have watched me–
rooted, grounded–
for a quarter century.

I do not know the sky.
We have watched it together–
listened, fascinated–
for nearly a half-century.

What we have is between heaven and earth.
Will we watch this union–
perfect sung notes, self-blinded heartbeats–
into the next half-century?

I will seek the heavens;
Build wings with dreams and doubt–
pages of a thousand poems, tears of an unexpected parting–
and find my place under the sun.

Margo Roby’s Tuesday Tryouts

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This is the journal of a poetic rabbit. Within the warren you'll find poetry, short stories, essays, art, book and movie reviews, and other odds and ends. If you happen to meet the fey princess, be courteous. This rabbit did and was forever changed.
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8 Responses to For Tuesday Tryouts – Let’s Fly

  1. brian miller says:

    nice…really like that last bit…building wings of dreams and doubts…the inclusion of doubt is very cool….as i would do the same…many fear it…that stanza though is the strongest for me…smiles.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      brian,
      It’s strongest for me as well, because that is exactly where I am now. I hadn’t thought about flying much, at least in writing, until I read Margo’s prompt. I like where it took me. Thanks for sharing it with me. 🙂

  2. ManicDdaily says:

    This is very lovely – good luck on the flight! k.

  3. margo roby says:

    I like this. You said low imagery, but this isn’t a poem for high imagery. I think you would lose the impact of the speaker’s words. What you have are strong verbs and nouns and that will do it.

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