NaHaiWriMo Day 29

despite snow
so many rabbits
leap for love

In this weather?

In this weather? (Photo credit: -Porsupah-)

Watch some here.

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13 Responses to NaHaiWriMo Day 29

  1. Luke Prater says:

    I’m feelin’ the ‘a-ha!’… I think you’re nailing it…

  2. Raven says:

    Aren’t they lovely! Terrific.

  3. brian miller says:

    hehe dont they ever stop? smiles. maybe i need to think deeper to get the sadness…smiles.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      brian,
      One could read “leap” as change or end. I saw it more of a dance or race when I wrote it. And no, they don’t really ever stop. Maybe in the dead of winter (and there wasn’t one this year). Happy you hopped by.

  4. slpmartin says:

    A sure sign that spring is on its way…when those bunnies begin to leap. 😉

  5. Maria Tatham says:

    Yousei,
    beautifully,
    you made it through
    a month that has
    an added day!
    Hurrah!

  6. Bill says:

    Did you mean for this to be so sad? I like it. Hmm, do I only like the sad ones?

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