NaHaiWriMo Day 22

eyes roll breathe puffs between my lips — shh, venting

The Dreaming Tree

summer’s oldest oaks rest venting sunlight threads

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This is the journal of a poetic rabbit. Within the warren you'll find poetry, short stories, essays, art, book and movie reviews, and other odds and ends. If you happen to meet the fey princess, be courteous. This rabbit did and was forever changed.
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6 Responses to NaHaiWriMo Day 22

  1. claudia says:

    oh wow…what a wonderful capture…both..the pic and your words..would love to climb that tree and just sit and breathe for a while..

  2. Raven says:

    Just plain perfect.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Raven,
      We’re almost done. Excited? I’m trying to put together some original (non-posted) haiku for acceptance at a haiku site. I’ve got a few I like, but I need ten in total. So … I’m still pretty wound up about haiku right now. I had a headache this afternoon, but I couldn’t sleep because I kept thinking of new ideas for another haiku. Good problem to have, even with a headache. Thank you for supporting me. I always look forward to reading your comments.

  3. brian says:

    nice…i like the second line best…venting the sunlight makes for a beautiful image…

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