Haiku of the Moment

drizzle changed
another soundtrack
freezing rain

Freezing Rain

Image by Patrick Johanneson via Flickr


About T A Smith

Just one of the literacy scholars on this site who wants to explore writing in all its complexities.
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24 Responses to Haiku of the Moment

  1. ManicDdaily says:

    These– this one and the later ones–are lovely. So great that you can be so succinct and vivid.

    (And love the dog!) K.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      😉 Glad you like it. I don’t know what I like more. Putting my thoughts into haiku again or just plain writing again. A bit of both, I know. Thanks for the visit and encouragement.

  2. A very very nice haiku, goodbye

  3. Fergiemoto says:

    Very creative – “another soundtrack”. It’s great!

  4. Shawna says:

    “another soundtrack” = awesome

  5. Irene says:

    I like the idea of weather as soundtrack.:)

  6. Right there with ya, this week.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Welcome. 🙂 I’ve enjoyed your small stones so much. Thank you for the comment. It has been one horrible week, and the weather was a muted reflection of that. Hope your week was just one of cold and precipitation.

  7. sandy says:

    Nice haiku, but I hope it doens’t happen here. We are still at the drizzle stage.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      It wasn’t really very bad. I’ve seen a lot worse in the time I’ve lived here. The writing was more a symbol of the drama in our lives than an actual weather report. Thanks for the visit and comment. 🙂

  8. roxie says:

    excellent capture of pic 🙂

  9. slpmartin says:

    I’ve never like freezing rain…well as a student I did…schools would be closed for the day. 🙂

    • Yousei Hime says:

      😀 True. I’d never seen it until I moved north. It’s beautiful to look at and nice for the day off from school, but treacherous in so many other ways.

  10. Raven says:

    This is lovely Yousei …

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