For One Single Impression

this incarnation
luckiest of all birth years —
poetic rabbit

response to One Single Impression prompt–avatar

for Monday Poetry Train Revisited

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About T A Smith

Just one of the literacy scholars on this site who wants to explore writing in all its complexities.
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38 Responses to For One Single Impression

  1. SandyCarlson says:

    Well done. Thank you.

  2. gabrielle says:

    such a light delicacy in your lines.

    (I’m a water dragon. you precede me with your elegance and creativity on the zodiac wheel)

  3. Loch Rob says:

    I come from the year of the dragon. Something about a poetic rabbit that has me smiling tonight.

  4. trisha says:

    poetic rabbit? loved it. 🙂

  5. ishabelle says:

    i was born under the year of the rat… but i like rabbits… 🙂 i like your haiku too…

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Ishabelle,
      Welcome. Thank you for your visit and you kind comment. The zodiac post has been fun because soany people have replied. Hope you’ll visit again.

  6. lesliepaints says:

    Imagine that. I finally looked up my birth year and found out it was the year of the rabbit. LOL! I like your haiku even better now that I did that! Chuckling all the way home.

  7. Amity says:

    I wish then I was born in a rabbit year…is that correct? Or year of the rabbit?

    I miss you in my space Big Sis!

  8. Andy Sewina says:

    Very well thought through!
    I like this!!

  9. william says:

    beautiful as always Yousei u are the master of Haiku xxx

  10. sandy says:

    Rabbits, perfect for you! Very nice.

  11. anthonynorth says:

    Enjoyed that. Great words.

  12. rdl says:

    nice one!! are u a rabbit? me too.

  13. Lisa at Greenbow says:

    I am so glad you are feeling so lucky. I feel lucky too finding this rabbit.

  14. Stan Ski says:

    I’m going to check my own birth year – I’ll let you know if mine was lucky…

  15. Technobabe says:

    Poetry to hop for! Nice haiku. You say this incarnation, are you looking forward to more?

  16. slpmartin says:

    Just too cute for words!…Really enjoyed it.

  17. Viola says:

    awesome Haiku

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