Joy

I can hear nothing
but bliss thumping in my ears–
memories revived.

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About T A Smith

Just one of the literacy scholars on this site who wants to explore writing in all its complexities.
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6 Responses to Joy

  1. I thought I already commented on this haiku several days ago, but I guess not. When I read this one, I go back and forth… do I want the “but” on the first line or the second line?

    My guess is that you did the same as you were writing.

    It gives a different shading each way. Intriguing to me. Well, you see how my haiku mind works.

    Now it popped out a new thing… on the second line its saying “only bliss…”

    Tell me when to stop… LOL It’s stopped!

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Cooooooooooool. Confession, I had not though of it. I was so excited about the blog, writing, starting my internal life again, I just tried to capture what I was feeling.

      I can hear naught but
      in my ears–delightful bliss
      memories revived.

      Whatcha think?

  2. heartshapedlies says:

    I love it! It’s amazing how the words and the structure together totally capture the feeling.

    • Yousei Hime says:

      Thanks. I was trying to capture how excited I was about starting this blog. Thank you for the visit in return. I hope you keep visiting. I look forward to reading more of your writing. 🙂

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